As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.
What are the factors that contribute to job satisfaction?
How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
Most employees spend more time of their life at work than that at home; hence, the satisfaction of their job is an important factor of their motivation. This essay will first discuss that the increasing of their salary is one of their job satisfaction’s factors and argues that this expectation is unrealistic.
The main factor, which makes employees satisfy with their job, is the increasing in their salary. This increasing means that companies appreciate what employees have done to contribute to the company’s development. Moreover, every person work to earn money to support their families and pay for their needs and a higher salary can offer them a better living standard. For example, a survey conducted in Dufferin Construction Ltd. in Toronto in 2018 showed that 60% of their employees said that the main factor, which kept them staying in the company and working hard everyday, was that their increased income every year.
However, this satisfaction is unrealistic for every individual in companies. That is to say that employees cannot expect to be paid a higher salary without having higher education and more experience. There is a standard of annual income for certain level of education and experience and all companies are not willing to pay more than that standard. For instance, according to 2018 income’s data of AutoCad Drafter in Toronto, a new graduated student, who had 2 years degree and did not have any experience, would earn a maximum amount of 35,000$ annually, while another new graduated student, who also had no experience but had a bachelor degree, could earn up to 45,000$ per year.
In conclusion, the factor that contribute to employee’s satisfaction at work is the salary’s increasing; however, this expectation is unrealistic without getting higher education and more experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...staying in the company and working hard everyday, was that their increased income every ...
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Line 5, column 548, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
...ence, would earn a maximum amount of 35,000$ annually, while another new graduated s...
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Line 5, column 674, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
Suggestion: $000
... a bachelor degree, could earn up to 45,000$ per year. In conclusion, the factor ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31292517007 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04521133025 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4722166689 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.166666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273186338591 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113354891592 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107191327825 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189207164438 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123869951776 0.056905535591 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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