A new acquitance of yours is thinking about studying your native language. How would you convince him or her that this would be a good decision? Use specific details in your response.
Studying new language is the most beneficial decision for everyone. You can gain plenty of profits by using another language. If I had to convince my friend to learn Mongolian, I would give two reasons.
First cause of why you should study our language is range of communication. Moreover, you can connect all people of this country, which allows understand art, religious and tradition of them. For example, you would know such as culture of nomadic tribe, greetings of each season, how to call horse by its age and watch movie, travel around the country without translator or guide by using our mother tongue. Furthermore, you will able to get job because employers prefer people who can speak many language. Thus, you will expand your knowledge, make new friends and promote your status.
Second essential thing is that you would be bilingual or multi lingual which has various effective results. According to research, speaking a second language can mean that you have a better attention span and can multi-task better than monolinguals. Likewise, being bilingual is linked to health benefits. For instance, researches recently found that there is growing evidence to suggest that bilingualism can delay the onset of Dementia and Alzheimer’s disease by as much as five years.
In conclusion, you will never regret for studying my native language. As a result, you would have information about Mongolia, enhance abilities, progress your career, save your money because you do not need to pay for guide, and even lengthen your time to live.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 493, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun language seems to be countable; consider using: 'many languages'.
Suggestion: many languages
...e employers prefer people who can speak many language. Thus, you will expand your knowledge, ...
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Line 2, column 588, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke new friends and promote your status. Second essential thing is that you would...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, second, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14624505929 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71587237462 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671936758893 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5483228809 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30774607021 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958081372035 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725180557953 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187611613081 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824681891339 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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