New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In today’s technologically advanced world, where revolutionary advancements in the field of E-commerce has drastically changed the shopping habits of the people. Leading to, enhancing the lifestyle of the society. However, such a development has resulted in certain social issues related to health and psychology. In my opinion, although technology have had positive impact on the consumer, it also have produced few negative trends.
Firstly, one of the most significant developments in the last couple of decades is that of E-commerce medium of shopping, in which customers can purchase anything from anywhere using websites such as Amazon and Alibaba. Such a phenomenon made peoples’ life way easier than it was a couple of decades ago. For example, in previous times to purchase a watch, an individual had to physically visit various shops to find and negotiate a best price. Whereas, today, watches can be purchased that too by comparing and finding best prices. Secondly, with the transforming technology, the citizenry is using digital currencies such as Visa, Master cards, and PayPal etc. Whereas, in the past, people used to rely solely on hard paper money. Such a drastic development has made it possible for the government and the banks to server customers in much more efficient and seamless manner. Thirdly, technology has made it possible for people to do international shopping through online channels which was not possible earlier. Furthermore, customers can today share gifts with their loved ones from around any corner of the globe through best-in-class technologically driven cargo services.
On the other hand, with the rapid transformations in the technology, consumers purchasing habits have increased to unprecedented levels. As a result, they indulge themselves in frequent and over-shopping. As a result leading to financial breakdown and psychological impact. For example, people shop using credit cards way more than their purchasing power leading to later financial concerns.
To conclude, it is undeniable fact that technology in the form of internet has become primary source of consumers purchases and has a vital role in the way the life of people has evolved in both positive as well as in negative means.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...sit various shops to find and negotiate a best price. Whereas, today, watches can...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... of people has evolved in both positive as well as in negative means.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, whereas, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42897727273 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07282765898 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9676448986 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.166666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0923359274826 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263717657244 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285858479264 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564215029737 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00278316612154 0.056905535591 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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