News editors decide what to broadcast on television what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence this decision? Do we become used to bad news? Would it to be better if more good news was reported?
It is true that editors have to make difficult decisions about what news should be broadcasted or published, and there are various factors could affect their choices. I admit that we are exposed to plenty of negative stories every day, but I think it can benefit the society as a whole.
Editors face a wide range of considerations when choosing what news stories to focus on. Firstly, they need to cover news that are interested by the general public, since most news agencies are profit-driven, and they need to sell more advertisements. Secondly, editors have social responsibilities to inform the people about important events and issues, and they should therefore make an effort to report stories that are in the public interest, even though sometimes negative news may cause bad influences. Finally, editors are probably under multiple pressures form their employers politically or financially. For example, the owners of a newspaper may have their particular political views that they want to promote.
In my view, society would benefit more if media keep covering bad news. I also think that a part of our human nature could be sensitive to negative information that reminding us to be aware of the dangerous at the moment as well as in the future. Besides, big companies and authorities tend to mask bad things, such as corruption, discrimination and delinquency. Because of this, media have the right and obligation to supervise governments and other powerful organizations. For instance, reports about the explosion of Samsung Galaxy Note 7 last year had protected many customer from being hurt.
In conclusion, editors normally find it difficult to choose which news to present, and I think bad news on TV and newspapers could be positive for most people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...o cover news that are interested by the general public, since most news agencies are profit-dr...
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Line 5, column 567, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun customer seems to be countable; consider using: 'many customers'.
Suggestion: many customers
...g Galaxy Note 7 last year had protected many customer from being hurt. In conclusion, edi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14878892734 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91261113098 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61937716263 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3832759087 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.461538462 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3846153846 7.06120827912 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282969904853 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917756279099 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766087852753 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176836674681 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336262502637 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.