News plays an important part of most people’s lives. Why is news so important to people? Why is so much news dedicated to bad news? Should the news focus on good news instead?
Since the medieval era, most of the people are habituated to start their day reading the newspaper. The current happenings across the world have become a matter of prime interest among the people of all ages. In my opinion, an individual cannot survive if he is unaware of what is happening in the world. As a result, he has to read or watch the news to stay competitive in the world. The media seems focussing more on negative news than positive ones to make more profit; but according to me, it is unfair to keep focussing on just negative news. Instead, news agency should opt balance view by showing all type of news that includes positive stories along with negative topics.
To begin with, it is undeniable that news plays a significant role in molding the thoughts of an individual. Sometimes, a person cannot just stand in a community if he does not know the current affairs. In any profession or career growth, today's man tends to shine out knowledgeable if he is aware of international level happenings. such individuals see faster growth in their career. Unequivocally, a person knowing less about the countries events seems ignorant and less compatible with others in a group.
Another aspect that worries many people is about negativity spread among the general population due to negative stories in newspapers. Apparently, this news creates fear and insecurity among the citizens, which is not good for the nation to grow. The people would start blaming the government and the ruling party for their situation. Consequently, the people and the administrative body cannot work for the benefit of their country. Although such news creates panic, the news agency continues to provide stories of crimes, murders and potential failures by state authorities because it catches more attention and helps the agencies to make more money. Apart from this, the second reason is that media has the responsibility to show the true picture, despite its ramifications. Therefore, the worst conditions are packed heavily in everyday news.
Furthermore, it is true that the positive stories create encouragement in youth to do better, which is eminent for the society to prosper. The good news highlighting the efforts of social reformers can set an example for others to follow. For instance, a woman educating slum children or an environmentalist working hard in educating people to protect the globe by lessening the pollutants should be highlighted, which would definitely motivate mass of people to walk on their steps. Thus, motivating stories should be given equal importance in the headlines.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that news plays a significant role in our lives and to stay competitive, it is required for each person to remain aware of important happenings around the globe. Moreover, the media department should give a piece of mix news that contains negative as well as equal positive news to encourage the country's population
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2477.0 1615.20841683 153% => OK
No of words: 485.0 315.596192385 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10721649485 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85874188132 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546391752577 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 777.6 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 13.0 2.52805611222 514% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3382350291 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.208333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2083333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344857320817 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916449985521 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826136591517 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195669331921 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768599537285 0.056905535591 135% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.