News stories on TV and in a newspaper are often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?
With the advancement in technology, photographs are play a vital role in news stories. some people argue that pictures are the most prominent in publishing news, whereas others think that textual news are more likely to effect on people’s mind. This essay will discuss both points of view.
There is no doubt that in recent years, news publisher more intend to use pictures in their news on all of news channel and they can attract their audience’s attraction. It is obvious that pictures in some fields of news such as sports and incidents encourage readers to follow the newest news. The people who devote virtually their whole time to working, for instance, have easy and quick access to follow the news just by looking at the photographs and filters out the words. we cannot deny the fact that, pictorial news have a dramatic effect on people who interest in their sports an heroes. To sum up, a pictorial and graphical depiction of news stories can be very appealing and convincing.
Furthermore, news with photos arouses the reader’s interest to a large extent. In my favorite newspaper or website, pictures of various celebrities compel me to spend long hours reading the articles about them. Notwithstanding the fact that we are engaged routine and busy life, a quick glance over some news headings and images in the morning newspaper may more effective than reading full news.
In conclusion, more than ever publishers add pictures to their stories to attract more readers. Adding pictures to peoples magazines help to understand topic much quiker and easier. From there reader can decide if article si worth reading at all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, may, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07299270073 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67591678911 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609489051095 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.43914345 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2857142857 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294302737786 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096772529122 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627092698908 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182006305731 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212673429823 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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