Nowadays children watch too much TV. Why is this happening? What can be done to prevent it?
With the emergence of technology T.V plays a prominent role in the life of every adolescent. Now it has become part and parcel of every child’s life. In these days children have obsession for watching T.V. This essay will not only elaborate the reasons of addiction of watching T.V but also highlight the points to overcome this problem.
To begin with, there are multifarious reasons for watching television. Firstly, in this cutting edge technology people want to live in big cities to earn their bread and butter. However, there are (less) fewer facilities such as parks and recreation centres due to over population. Therefore, kids do not go out and always watch television at home. In addition, both parents are working and quite busy in rat race of city life. They do not have time to spend with their beloved ones. Therefore, children tend to watch T.V in their leisure time. A study reveals that 70% of adolescents are not going outside due to less space and overcrowd areas.
On the flip side, there are many solutions to this problem. Firstly, parents can spend quality time with their children and they can take out kids for entertainment. Moreover, they should encourage their children to go outside and explain the importance of playing outdoor sports. Watching T.V is not an inevitable problem and with the help of awareness given by parents, we can eradicate the problem of addiction of watching T.V. Apart from that parents can also explain the perilous and devastating effects of watching more T.V.
To sum up, although it’s an alarming problem for kids, It can be resolved by giving valuable time and explain the detrimental effects of addiction of watching T.V
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96478873239 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57833049419 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556338028169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.9804523744 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171578745999 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503871266789 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535607585021 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111727135633 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323090352678 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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