Nowadays in many countries women have full time jobs.Therefore,it is logical to share household tasks evenly between men and women.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays an ever - increasing number of women work full time , and in this reality it is widely believed that house chores should be shared between men and women equally.I strongly agree with this statement.
One of the reasons for sharing housework between males and females is to promote gender equality.A stereotype that has existed a long time is that females ought to stay home , taking care of the family once they got married.This includes looking after the children and doing all of the housework , which is fairly labour - intensive.However , this approach could have quite a few disadvantages.It would render women less able of keeping abreast of what is happening in the job market , thus forming a lifestyle where they might find it arduous to step into the society again.To avoid this , many women are willing to get back into workforce soon after their maternity leave , and once they do , it makes sense that their husbands should share part of the household chores , to fulfill their family responsibilities.
Nevertheless , we cannot be oblivious of several drawbacks of this trend.One potential downside is that men are less experienced in dealing with households tasks.This is because many seldom take an active role in doing housework , according to customs of many countries.As a result , they may end up doing household tasks in a less than perfect way, which could contribute to some unnecessary quarries between partners, hindering their family bond.However,the likelihood of this happening isn't very high, because wives can offer some tips or guidance to their husbands when they learn how to share house chores such as mopping floors or doing laundry.
To sum up , although some conflicts might be triggered when equally sharing the duties of household tasks, the benefits of this trend are relatively oblivious.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, thus, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87774152744 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 20.2975951904 360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 281.558164506 49.4020404114 570% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 383.25 106.682146367 359% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.5 20.7667163134 354% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.0 7.06120827912 297% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294102555015 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179556561636 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963443887755 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179556561636 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963443887755 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.9 13.0946893788 305% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.62 50.2224549098 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 11.3001002004 281% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.61 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.2 10.1190380762 308% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.