Nowadays, many families migrate to other countries due to employment. Some people say it benefits the children of immigrants’ families. Other say it is more difficult for the children of these families.
Discuss both views and give you opinion.
The rate of migration to different nation is increasing exponentially as of result of work transfers. To which, many people believe that it is difficult for kids of the migrant families to adjust in to new environment while others believe that such migration is beneficial for children. In my opinion, although children face some problems initially, it is really benefit to children in the long run.
To begin with, moving to new culture during early age can help in several ways. As children are very flexible compared to adults, they adopt new surrounding very easily, especially health wise, which can be difficult for fully developed body of adults. Moreover, they have an opportunity to learn two different cultures and understand the concept of cultural harmony and diversity, which increase the chances of employment in the long run. Because businesses are globalized so employer prefers their employees with various language proficiencies. Thus, kids will have better future prospects when they settled in new countries.
However, it is not as lucrative as it sounds because several times migration has detrimental impact on the fragile mind of children. They find it very difficult to adjust in sudden changes in the culture, which alienate them from the society and often draws them to the life of crime. For instance, many criminals are result of identity crisis and cultural discrimination. Furthermore, it creates disconnection from their original culture and cannot fit in the new one, which puts them in the dilemma of belief and they end feeling like nomad throughout their life. So, migrations sometimes have a very negative impact on the juvenile mind.
In Conclusion, children may face some issues in embracing different surroundings but if they are assisted to adjust, they will enjoy several advantages from the migration. Thus, parents should gradually teach the ways to effectively mingle in new culture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 364, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'benefited', 'benefitted'.
Suggestion: benefited; benefitted
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28896103896 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82483765767 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9847518184 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.6 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145129691398 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049658984818 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670127357317 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103928197942 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0987001210202 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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