Nowadays many parents believe that children’s usage of tablets or computers would be good for their future academic career. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such belief? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds in the present scenario. majority parents believe that computers and tablets are the best sources for their children in prospect careers. Although these have certain advantages and disadvantages.
To embark on merits, children can learn easily through these electronic gadgets by way of audio- visual presentations. In schools, teachers also used laptops and projectors for learning process. Nowadays, most of the institutions used emails and messages for conveying any information to the students and their parents. most of the assignments are submitted through online in a document or pdf form. E-learning is widely accepted by all countries in the world. most of the competitive exams are held online like banking, engineering and much more.
On the contrary, there are certain disadvantages also. computers and laptops makes the children lazy and lack of social interaction among them. They spend more time in front of the screen of the gadgets and not played outdoor games. Rays of that makes dangerous impact on the eyes on the students and their eyesight goes on weak day by day. Not only this, their writing skill and vocabulary becomes too poor due to use of slangs and it is impossible for majority students to write neatly. Numerous children use more computers for playing games, watching movies and listening music. In this way, it inhibits the educational growth of students.
To conclude, technology has two sides and it depends on us that how we use it. If we use in a efficient manner then definitely it will provide us valuable result.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14559386973 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77961360923 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7386337537 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.6111111111 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94444444444 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152399422799 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431879346784 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618491396194 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912039220191 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672487177404 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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