Nowadays more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same jobs.What problems does this cause?What are some possible solutions?

Essay topics:

Nowadays more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same jobs.

What problems does this cause?

What are some possible solutions?

The job market is a competitive world altogether. With the increase in the cost of living, older people have to work after their retirement, eventually, the main challenge for them is the competition with the younger workforce for the same job. While this can create problems, there are steps that can be taken to reduce the impacts.

One of the first challenges for the senior population is to grab a job that arises from the fact that they lack knowledge of software and programs that are profusely used in the present work domain. For example, information technology is one such requirement in today’s digital world. Youngsters have profound and up-to-date knowledge and expertise in this sector, merely due to their college degrees, while aged people sometimes struggle to learn even the basics. Another major concern is receding performance due to longer working hours. Most of the senior citizens are prone to fatigue and generally cannot work for longer intervals. While some companies encourage extra working hours, it is difficult for the elderly to keep up the enthusiasm for consecutive tiring days at work.

However, it is important that the government should take some preventive measures to mitigate the effects. The government could furnish free training programs for older people in the most prevalent career courses required to secure a job. This can be done in public libraries or community centers which are easily accessible by older members. In addition, adequate legislation and control on working hours should be ensured by administration by denigrating the company which deliberately supports the culture of late working hours.

In conclusion, sometimes aged people have to work to support their family financially. While outdated work experience is a major setback, continuous learning through government free skill-building program can elevate their chances to beat the younger competition.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 454, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to even'
Suggestion: to even
...aged people sometimes struggle to learn even the basics. Another major concern is re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4219269103 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85797716321 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58803986711 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7318435522 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245780619354 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780877937727 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677671076945 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150770232525 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451531007291 0.056905535591 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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