Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Peter,
I was really excited to meet you this weekend as we planned for movies. But I apologize that I won’t be able to come because of the sudden change in the plans at my workplace.
Due to some programming issues in my new project, I’ve to visit my company’s head office in California this weekend. If you don’t mind, my colleague, Sabrina, will be happy to join you. Actually, she has recently joined the company and knows no one in the city. So, I voluntarily asked and she agreed to come.
I know I should have introduced you to her first before making any plans. But, don’t worry she is amazing, cheerful and pretty talkative, just like us. You’ll feel as if you know her for long. I’ll give her your contact details so that you both can coördinate and meet up.
Once again, I’m sorry that I had to cancel. We’ll definitely meet soon. Till then take care.
Best wishes
Laura
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, really, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80487804878 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66054969653 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.731707317073 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7750230027 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.2857142857 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7142857143 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172906167655 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608112004528 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794346493397 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995348521782 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066218151241 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.