You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:say which advertisement you are answeringdescribe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they wou

Essay topics:

You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:

say which advertisement you are answering

describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about

explain why you would be a suitable teacher

Dear sir/madam,

I am writing to express my interest in the post of electronics teacher at your community college for night classes.

Last week, I have seen an advertisement in "The Hindu" which entails the requirement of qualified professionals for various teaching positions at your institute. I am interested in teaching signal processing and MATLAB.

Actually I used to be an assistant professor in an engineering college where I taught these subjects and have nearly five years of experience in MATLAB projects. This language will furnish insights in creating communication devices and I am sure it will benefit students in order to gain practical knowledge regarding the subject. Moreover, at the end of the term, the completion of the project will boost their confidence and enhance a sense of establishment.

I would be really grateful if you could consider me for the job. I have relevant experience and it would my privilege to teach the students. Also, night hours would not be a problem for me as my home is near to the college. I am attaching my résumé for your reference.

I look forward to receiving your response.

Thank you in advance.

Yours faithfully,

Anmol

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, look, moreover, really, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26530612245 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07951593069 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0596404416 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3846153846 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276798902845 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850277975436 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661213129573 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133539096881 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744258784379 0.0580467560999 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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