Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industries to move to regional areas outside urban centres.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is believed by some people that big companies should be shifted to regional areas from megacities. This transition will be advantageous for city people as there will be less pollution although companies could have to face some short term production and economic challenges. In my opinion, a pollution-free environment simply outweighs every setback.
One significant benefit of moving large corporations to the suburbs is that urban centers can have a clean environment. As industries produce toxic emissions which stays in the air for longer in cities because of less green cover. While the countryside has a higher tree density that can easily recede carbon dioxide gases from the atmosphere. Moreover, megacities have property constraint due to which industries fails to manage their industrial waste. Suburbs, however, have an enormous amount of empty land which can be utilized by organizations for better segregation and disposal of waste. Thus, maintaining the pollution-free environment.
Nonetheless, when companies move to the outskirts, decreasing employment opportunities for the people residing in the cities can be a huge setback as many could become redundant. In addition, companies also have to face challenges in order to meet their profits. Firstly, because the raw material will be become expensive due to the added transportation costs, which was nearly negligible in the cities. Also, the material has to travel extra miles, there can arise some unforeseeable obstacles, such as delay in delivery, which can affect productivity. Therefore, a few glitches in production can have repercussions on finances.
In conclusion, shifting industries from metropolitans to the countryside has more benefits for people as they can appreciate a healthy and clean environment. Whereas companies with mere proper planning can manage financial risks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63829787234 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16355783639 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609929078014 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4313955791 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210216167825 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650103997143 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602535467367 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130827875013 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601372812732 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.