Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
A section of society insists that children who the liberty of making all their decisions by themselves are more likely to become selfish. Whereas, others think that independent decision-making ability is significant so that children should become responsible and confident adults. In my opinion, parents should keep a close eye on their offspring’s actions and correct them whenever necessary.
On the one hand, the major negative implication of not questioning a child’s decision is that they are likely to become self-centered and complacent. This is because youngsters could think whatever they are doing is correct, as no elder person has pinpointed any mistake in their actions. Unfortunately, such adolescents will grow up to be selfish individuals who are usually ignorant about other people’s wishes. For instance, most of the children want to watch a TV program of their liking. They are simply reluctant to value whether other family members are interested in watching the same show or not. Considering this, parents should intervene in this behavior and make their offspring understand that other people's choices are important too.
On the other hand, there are numerous positive impacts of giving a child the liberty of making decisions. One is the child will become responsible very early on in life. For example, when children are given pocket money they are supposed to handle their expenses wisely, as their survival is dependent on it. Also, this experience from childhood will help them in younger years to render better economic planning. In addition, as elders are considerate about the decision of younger family members, this sense of independent decision making will boost their confidence as well.
In conclusion, I believe, children should be granted the freedom to making their own choices. However, parents should also teach them to be considerate and respectable about other people’s opinions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46688741722 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93731007008 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586092715232 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6510289436 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.1875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265026846837 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855354870767 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607391636714 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167312068737 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396921980757 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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