Nowadays more and more young people hold the important positions in the government. Some people think that it is a good thing，while others argue that it is not suitable. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
these days, relevant roles and positions in the government are been taken by young people and this phenomenon is increasing in numbers. while various people recognize this trend as positive, some others qualify this as unsuitable for the government. I strongly believe that young people have a tremendously positive contribution to support government performance, and in this essay, I would like to review these two contrasting views.
The sector of people who think that young people are unsuitable for the government have clear their reasons, one of the most remarkable is about the experience that old parliamentarians have over the younger because they argue that countries have to be governed by people with experience. In addition, they are totally convinced old people have a stronger knowledge to support the nation's decision making.
On the other hand, the opposite sector says that having young parliamentarians, the country has more chance to improve things through fresh and new ideas because younger people are more up to date with new trends and technologies, for instance, one of the most popular communication ways these days is Tweeter and Facebook, which are the most popular media to inform and collect information from the community, this kind of contact with the society is unusual and complex for old people. Furthermore, young people are enthusiastic and full of positivism which is necessary for the country's improvement.
In conclusion, while people are facing the new ideas and enthusiasm from younger against the experience and knowledge from older, I truly believe that the balance of ages in the government is the key of improvement for the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3171641791 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92330445818 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529850746269 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.198184805 49.4020404114 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.125 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.375 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240759471076 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113204998506 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037550314968 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138718710451 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540769498907 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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