In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from
your own knowledge or experience.
In England, elders used to change their place, to stay in houses where more people from the same age is living, and they are assisted by nurses. The country eventually covers their old care expenses in these places, but, is England or older's relatives who should cover their expenses?. I reckon, all their expenses should be paid by their relatives, but the country should cooperate to elders' families to arrange with all this financial support. this essay will discuss this issue using examples to support arguments and demonstrate points.
Indeed, the government is supporting in many cases elders when they decide to live in elders' houses, and that is a superb cooperation to the older community, because not all retired people or their relatives have the financial resources to resist elders' houses expenses, for instance a research made in the same country last year, reveals that more than 65% of retired people have pensions to support just their daily expenses, 30% can afford their daily expenses and save money and 5% of them does not have access to any retirement compensation. Therefore the country is giving a great aid to the older community sector.
However, it does not mean that elders are only the government responsibility, because families have a potential responsibility with their grandparents and in many cases, relatives have excellent financial conditions, for example, in the same research, it could be seen that the middle class is only 20% of the population, 70% is high class, and 10% is low class. Seen these results, it could be concluded that the majority of the population can afford their old parents expenses at retirement houses.
To sum up, although the retired people do not have access to a big pension, their relatives are able to support their retirement house expenses, but the government should give some bonus or incentives to promote and help families who are in charge of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i reckon, in many cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.059375 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63806088527 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521875 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 144.22213662 49.4020404114 292% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.888888889 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5555555556 20.7667163134 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160979534037 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717656317955 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297838958647 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104373453045 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308065299753 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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