Nowadays online education has become popular as more institutes and companies are offering courses online. However, many people prefer the traditional, classroom training or study. Disciss the advantages and disadvantages of both methods.
Internet based education is gaining ground every now and then as the number of organization that are proffering online courses is incessantly augmenting, ample of people choose the conventional method of study though. This essay will discuss the merits and demerits of both the methods.
To commence with, online method can be reached to the poor people as well as to villages and rural areas to educate them. Indian government, for example, has recently started to uplift the literacy rate by providing Internet access to rural area for educational purposes. Moreover, students will not have only good command on technology, but can also study as per their convenient time. However, students would be distracted when they would come across the various types of technology, to illustrate, instead of studying, one of my friends started playing different games online when he starts learning on internet. Additionally, students would not get the utter understanding of subjects because of lack of face to face interaction. Hence, I believe that traditional way of education is more advantageous.
On the contrary, students will be inculcated discipline as well as virtues of life, apart from academic knowledge and on top of that, they would get deep insight in each and every subject which is not possible with online education. To exemplify, according to one survey, students who learn under conventional method have more IQ level than students who study online. Furthermore, despite of having numerous perquisites, classroom based education will be monotonous and boring for students due to the continues studious ambience around them. In addition to that, nowadays, it is arduous work to find a good teacher with suffice acquaintances of particular subjects. Although, I believe that, this method is better than online method.
In conclusion, agglomerating all the benefits and drawbacks of both the methods, I believe that traditional way is more effective and it is recommended that every parents should patronize their children to study with conventional method.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 44, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...ernet based education is gaining ground every now and then as the number of organization that are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the contrary, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39384615385 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93026484656 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581538461538 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2449085042 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.214285714 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3571428571 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122496536878 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445866329558 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033019005955 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828978124614 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263877493079 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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