Nowadays people are moving to other countries for work.Some people say it is difficult for children lives ,others think it is better for them.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
with the globalization,migration to other countries has become more easier as it was hard to set few decades ago so, masses are getting settled abroad for earning money whereas some people think that it is very hard to live there.In this essay I will discuss about the both views of the statement so that a feasible conclusion comes at the end.
There are plethora of difficulties in other countries. To begin with, excessive pressure and workload deteriorate their life hence, masses do not prefer to spend time at that place. Secondly, local people prefer to communicate in their mother language due to this it becomes deleterious to adjust at that environment. repercussions of this is, migrants are not able to communicate because of language barrier. Last but the most griming issue is discrimination, this can be done in plethora of ways such as color, language, religion and on the basis of appearance which eventually make living in other countries more aggravated.
On the other hand, there are some children who prefer to live in abroad because to get different experience in terms of job and culture which helps in getting better opportunity in career. In addition to this, some jobs are not available in their home country so, they prefer to move other country for getting better experience. Moreover, there are some places where one cam relish many benefits for instance, medical, children ,education, old age benefits which attracts many youngsters,
By concluding this, no doubt it is very difficult to live on another country but sometimes fir secure future many people prefer to move in another countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11194029851 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9035893167 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.0009193546 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.222222222 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7777777778 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261916643322 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976502151919 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746867658065 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151806155338 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513265527386 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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