Some people think that online reading material Are better for children others argue that traditional paper-based result better. Discuss and give your opinion.
With advancement in technology, usage of internet has been increased in children. Some people prefer that reading books through internet is better whereas others think that notes, class books are better so, In this essay I will discuss about the above statement and give my opinion on it.
With the increase in competition, children are nowadays wanted to be smarter than others so, they try to learn more and stay updated with new technology, gadgets. In spite of this, YouTube, mobile apps, educational websites guide a student and provide an accurate and latest reading material. Although, some websites are paid but there are many videos for online sessions. Hence, more knowledge will help in career and give more opportunity.
On the other hand, traditional based education is more preferred in many schools, the follow the old books like reading textbooks, preparing daily notebooks. It is correct at some extent but mostly textbooks involved outdated material whereas, children can learn new information from the latest resources like articles, research papers. It eventually widened the knowledge and helps to create interest in different topics whether it is science, arts, mathematics or commerce.
By concluding this, no doubt education is must for children whether it is from traditional way or online way but the foremost essential part is that information must be updated and accurate.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, whereas, no doubt, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45205479452 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71753570588 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65296803653 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1259146251 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.4 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278060489836 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856310592983 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812002505783 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149736724824 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776680108766 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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