Nowadays people buy a lot of things even though they don’t really need them.
Why is it happening, in your opinion? Is it a positive or negative trend for the individual and the society?
With the inception of modern world, purchase limits of every human has been increased vividly. Not only spending power, but the industries lure them with the various advertisements which attract former towards their products. Certainly this new trend has many results, as i believe this is positive trend for companies and society, but as individually, i believe this may can have devastated results.
Companies in order to make their business more profitable, exploit human psychology and make their products more tempting and in the way they advertise their various products clearly depicts that people are attracted more towards the limited edition products and they do the same. For an illustration, KFC, a famous chain all over the world, Launched Double Down Burger for 5 fives only and for the various surveys it was found that their sales were doubled during this period.
Increment in the shopping has different effects on society and individuals. Socially, it is positive trend as plethora of people are earning their bread and butter by selling products and with the behaviour of shopping more, it is certainly good move for them. Even for the establishments, it is good move as flow of money is maintained and revenue can be earned from the taxes. However, it is certainly a negative trend for individuals. Spending useful money on un-required materials does not allow them to save money for tough times which make them to apply for loan applications and increase stress in their lives.
In hindsight, it is evident that there are many reasons for the increase in shopping and it has opposite results for society and individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12222222222 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69681771515 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551851851852 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5580112559 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.727272727 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168198062565 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709419851488 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428026072277 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103071955371 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433125048307 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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