Nowadays, numbers of opportunities are available for people to reach towards their goals and in order to achieve those goals people are crossing borders to reach a certain height in the professional life. However, this had led to different arguments with the masses regarding the children suffering because of the conduct of their parents. There are some people who assert while some hold a dissenting opinion. The essay will deal with both the sides of arguments followed by an opinion.
On the one side, the influx of people in some increased had increased multi folds as many are flocking from their countries in search of better life. As such, it is readily being argued that the result of such a change makes the children suffer because a child who has grown in one society with a fixed set of friend circle cannot be thrown into a new culture with language constraints and expected to blend in well. For instance, in a study conducted by Ministry of Family of Norwegian Government had published in a report that immigrant children are often secluded from the peers due to cultural as well as language barriers which hamper their growth and development. Thus, it can be said that the move may lead to detrimental effects on the mindset of the children and a feeling of loneliness will prevail in their life.
On the other hand, there is a better side to the children whose parents move abroad with the aim of a better life. However, the move is undoubtedly a daunting task for everyone, but the better side to it is that the child, as well as the family, are close to one of the best resources in terms of food, education, jobs and security etc. A large number of people move to different countries in search of the same only. For example, the child has access to the best of the world teaching methodology which could not be obtained back home. Therefore, it can be said that the children are on a better pedestal.
In conclusion, in my opinion, I feel that the suffering are similar in each and every part of the world. It is about one’s perspective towards life. Further, the one who has been marred in career due to poor access to wide variety of things will appreciate the bright side even in the darkest side. One has to be open to change in life and with change comes great things in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60774818402 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48125783045 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491525423729 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.6675822478 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.941176471 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2941176471 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94117647059 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235038179257 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736128845949 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436193553505 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140387602156 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581670428939 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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