Nowadays we can see definite signs of surplus production in almost every industry sector, and this is leading to environmental damage. What are some possible solutions to this situation?
Experts throughout both the developing and developed world have debated on the ever increasing production of items in every industry sector. Many believe that production of surplus products is leading to environmental hazards and personally I strongly agree with it. This essay with discuss the issues using examples and a few suggestions.
On one hand there is ample evidence that states that the production of goods in ever sector like automobiles, electronics and clothing has considerably increased. The hike in production is to meet the ever increasing demand of people. For instance, most people like to buy new mobile phone on yearly basis even though the new model has similar benefits compared to the existing one. For example, an extensive study done by Oxford University states that about 80% of people like to buy new trendy products that possess the latest technology. Therefore, it is conclusively clear that people buy new items on yearly basis in order to keep up with the latest trends.
On the other hand surplus production has a clear repercussion on the environment as most of the items produced are non-degradable in nature and also increase the use of fossil fuels. For example, a recent empirical research by UK government states that the surplus production of vehicles has led to increase in the demand of petroleum thus making it expensive to purchase. In order to mitigate the situation, government can ensure that the products produce are environment friendly that will help to keep the pollution in control and reduce the usage of fossil fuels. For instance, manufacturers can produce cars that run on batteries instead of petroleum thus saving the precious fossil fuels and reduce the contamination. Likewise, the same could be said for electronic items that are eco-friendly and can be disposed without adulterating the environment. Additionally, governments can also run various campaigns and advertisements that showcase the importance of saving the environment and encourage citizens for using eco-friendly products like cloth bags instead of plastic bags and use paper disposable items instead of plastics.
From the arguments and examples given I firmly believe that the awareness needs to be created among people for being mindful and saving the environment. It is predicted that the demand of eco-friendly items will increasingly grow in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, likewise, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30526315789 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96982049879 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0140286041 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132149667213 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469961679012 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401622447448 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865827306097 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728551442912 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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