Nowadays we see an increase in social problems involving teenagers. Many believe that it is because parents spend more time at work and less with their children. Do you agree or disagree.
In the recent years, the cost of living has increased drastically, owing to which it has become mandatory for parents to work for longer hours. Some people opine that, the key reason behind the upsurge in the number of social issues related to teenagers is that these parents are not able to spend enough time with their children. I completely agree with this opinion and in my essay I will support my views with examples.
Undoubtedly, parents nowadays are struggling hard to make the ends meet and to provide a better future to their children. But in the event of doing so, they are not able to pay proper attention to their wards. As a result, several times it is seen that there is nobody to correct their mistakes. Owing to which these kids are unable to judge between right and wrong behavior and eventually end up in acquiring a personality which is unacceptable by the society. To illustrate, these teenagers are often aggressive and short tempered. Having these characters, they are neglected by their community and consequently are forced to live a life of isolation.
Also, it is seen that these kids often fall prey to certain habits which lead them towards a disastrous life. As working parents spend most of their time in their workplace, there is no one to monitor these youngsters. Consequently, they get indulged in bad habits example drug addiction, smoking and alcoholism. These youths when introduced into the society, may get involved in unwanted altercations and ultimately may end up in legal actions against them. If parents spend adequate time with their children and understand their behavior, they may not get steeped into these undesired habits.
In conclusion, I strongly concur that parents’ proper attention towards their children plays a crucial role in their upbringing. If the parents do not spend enough time with them, they may become aggressive and may also get attracted towards detrimental habits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, so, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04643962848 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69789328659 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547987616099 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2328851377 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230428121171 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786110336595 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653885747244 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152422067773 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334664530942 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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