The only way to improve safety of our roads is to give much stricter punishments on deriving offense. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Today, escalating roads safety is one of the major concerns in all societies. A flock of people holds that a harsh disciplines system is the only way making people to comply rules. I believe that although this action has crucial impacts on declaring the rate of roads’ offenses, there are other measures which give governments the opportunity to control this issue.
When it comes to roads’ safety, most of the driving crimes are held by drivers who are not experienced enough to cope with an unexpected and challenging situation. So, legislating a rule flattering this cohort derivers to enter highways and drive with high speed can make a profound contribution to stabilizing roads safety in order that amateurs can become ready and. Besides that, people are usually careless about signs and regulations. Hence, it had better that governments run programs yearly trough which drivers can recall such information.
In some cases, even harsh punishments and fines cannot affect roads’ safety. For instance, a host of accidents is resulted in poor infrastructure, including lacking proper fences, road lights, and signs. As a result, governments have to optimize structures quality if they want to keep an eye on this matter. Another counter-measure is secluding roads for different vehicles such as bicycle, buses and trucks Because each of them has specific driving constraints. Thus, although planing separated paths is costly, it is well worth the effort and help to control the rate of fatal accidents.
In conclusion, despite the fact that fining system is one of the counter-measures forcing people to obey rules, provided that governments consider other actions like improving infrastructure and designing new roads in their pipeline, they can achieve better results.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'disciplines'' or 'discipline's'?
Suggestion: disciplines'; discipline's
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...opportunity to control this issue. When it comes to roads' safety, mos...
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...ivers can recall such information. In some cases, even harsh punishments an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42348754448 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95198679033 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665480427046 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3042151469 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.230769231 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117286172065 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380001346675 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307828785807 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690271603455 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283234948681 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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