you recently changed job, and you want to tell a person who you used to work with about your change of job.
write a letter to that person in your letter
describe your new job
explain whether you think it was a good idea to change job
suggest that you meet again soon
Dear Sue,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to tell you about my new job. As you know, after my daughter is born, my salary didn’t satisfy all my family’s desires. So, I had to work evening in order that I can fulfill all our needs or change my career.
At first, I was a little uncertain about that. But, consulting with my parents and husband, I found that it is well worth the effort. Because not only does my new job give me the opportunity to progress, but also the new company offers some profits such as transfer, lunch and shopping token. And, all of them can cut down some of my excessive cost.
My new career is in accordance with<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="career "></span> the previous one. Besides that, I am responsible for going to other countries and organize the company meeting with other enterprises, through which I can achieve delightful<span class="hiddenSuggestion" pre="and "></span> and useful experiences. I have got some news to tell you, so it would be great if we could see each other next Friday.
I look forward to catching up with you soon.
All the best,
Helia
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, so, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01020408163 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.21444630815 2.54303337028 166% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698979591837 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1534960478 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5384615385 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0769230769 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176904819953 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773603002744 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077988530787 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125435208825 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684434664666 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.