The only way to improve safety on our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offenses.
What extent do you agree or disagree?
So many people perish on road accidents all the time. Some people believe that the only option to make roads safer is by introducing tougher punishments for law breakers. Although raising the fines and throwing drivers to jail can be beneficial to some extent, I believe it is not enough to prevent fatal incidents.
On the one hand, current laws do not act as a deterrent for so many privileged citizens who can pay off the speeding tickets without getting affected by them. Nevertheless, speeding is the greatest cause of road accidents which could have been prevented if drivers who exceed the limit speed had faced severe consequences. Therefore, it is reasonable to assume that by establishing stricter laws for driving offences, such as imprisonment for those who repeatedly break the law, can send a loud message to the community that every action has its consequences and no one is above the law. Furthermore, punishments such as ceasing driving licenses of careless drivers which drive while they are drunk or under the influence of drugs can avoids potential catastrophes from occurring.
On the other hand, applying more serious punishments to driving offenders though has its own merits, it will not be sufficient to persuade individuals to abide by the law. Psychologists have conducted numerous research on drivers to determine the reason behind driving crimes. The results illustrated that people often are not aware of the dire outcomes of their actions while breaking the law. For example, lots of people who were fined due to surpassing the speed limit argued that their act of defiance would not harm anybody since they know how to handle their car. However, accident figures prove otherwise as most of the accidents resulted in passengers’ or pedestrians’ death were caused by drivers who used to pride themselves on their driving competencies. Hence, I believe educational program which raise people awareness can open people eyes and help them grasp the significance of what is on stake here, people's lives.
In conclusion, although by introducing serious punishment for driving offences roads would become safer, I strongly believe some awareness campaign can have a great impact on individuals to make them think twice before breaking a law.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22554347826 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87866921895 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584239130435 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.295325034 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.357142857 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13925453683 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504376694723 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359459510071 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943838542246 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221417454252 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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