Recently your employer offered some employees to do some work directly from home. Write a letter to your manger requesting the same arrangement. You should say– Why do you want to work from home?– Why would it be beneficial for the company and yourself.
Dear Mr Jahedi,
It is has come to my attention that the company has started a new policy to let some employees to work remotely. Honestly, I am thrilled with this new development and really would like to be a part of the program. In the following, I will explain my reasoning why this change is beneficial for both parties involved.
Since I could not afford to live in a city, I reside in the country side. Being far away from the office I have to wake up super early to avoid the traffic jam. Besides, I cannot spend any additional hours at the office duo to the long commute I tend to leave in order to get home and rest a little.
The unbearable distance has taken a toll on me to the point I have considered quitting my job! I have sleep deprivation since the amount of sleep I get is less than adequate. Had not been for the excruciating hours spent in the traffic, I would have slept longer. When I get to work it takes me almost 2 hours to gain my optimal performance. Furthermore, by giving me permission to work remotely you can use my desk and space to hire another assistance who you wanted so badly but did not have the resource for.
Sincerely yours,
Behnaz Yousei
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr Jahedi, It is has come to my attention that the ...
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Line 9, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in order to get home and rest a little. The unbearable distance has taken a toll...
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Line 13, column 265, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the traffic, I would have slept longer. When I get to work it takes me almost 2 hour...
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Line 13, column 513, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...adly but did not have the resource for. Sincerely yours, Behnaz Yousei
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, honestly, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40807174888 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52726291738 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641255605381 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.607779249 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3636363636 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163311779182 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507786095262 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427304966447 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987702218708 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366533834073 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.