The only way to solve increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?
Better parenting skills are the only solution to curb growing crime rate among young offenders. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the notion because parents always enrich constructive skills in their children. The paramount cause which provokes young criminals to commit crime is not the bad parenting instead the unavailability of resources and poverty.
To start with, parents are always considerate for their child’s development. They try to develop positive skills in their off springs by imitating themselves as the groomed personality, which is itself an example of commendable parenting skills. Admittedly, none of the parents want their children’s to be criminals. Therefore, it is agreed that teaching better parenting skills will not going to be helpful to control the crime rate in youth.
Another important reason for not considering parenting skills as the sole way to control crime is analyzing the cause of crime in young offenders. They commit crime due to scarcity of resources to fulfill their wants. Growing affluence and revolutionized technological gadgets influenced youngsters to grab these through easy money. Criminal activities such as snatching, pickpocketing, and stealing are the easiest way to achieve such things. For instance, last week in Karachi, Pakistan, a seventeen year old boy was caught; he was snatching the apple phone and the apple watch. Upon investigation, he revealed that he was enticed to such devices and due to poverty and unavailability of resource, he could not afford this. Therefore, he commits such crimes. Further, he also feared that his parents will be stressed due to his illegitimate act because they always wanted them to be good human being.
To conclude, crime rates among youngsters are increasing rapidly. I strongly believe that in order to solve the situation teaching parenting skills is a preposterous approach because parents are concerned for good upbringing of their children instead governmental authorities ought to look for the principal causes of crimes that is lack of resources due to poverty and provide avenues to solve it.
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There is no doubt that the
There is no doubt that the crime rate is rapidly increasing across the globe and it is noted that the majority of the crimes are done by youngsters. I agree, that parents definitely play a major role in the upbringing of a child and even parents need some consultation on how they can raise their child in a better way.
Firstly, gone are those days where the father was considered as the head of the family and he was the only one responsible for earning bread and butter for the family. As the world has become too competitive and the change in trends motivated and encouraged even the mothers to work in order to earn and have better living than before. This eventually, resulted in a lack of time spent in taking care of a child. It is believed and proved that a child's brain is very fragile and delicate during his teenage and hence proper guidance and monitoring are very much required to prevent their kids from indulging in the bad company of friends.
Secondly, nowadays parents rely blindly on caretakers and give their child in the hand of nannies who are just concerned about their salaries and are least bothered about the all-round development of the child. According to a survey done by the lecturers of Boston University in 2018, in 90% of the families both father and mother are working and they rely on schools and child daycare institutes for the development of their children.
To conclude, even though parents never teach or want their child to get involved in any sort of criminal activity but at the same time, it is their duty to monitor their kid more closely and prevent him from getting into any negative energies around him.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43806646526 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99806285824 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543806646526 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.6973286297 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.882352941 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291209014188 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969546979704 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905209619901 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198238314651 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624438850538 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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