Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to alter our character traits.
To what extent do you agree?
It is often deliberated individuals behaviors, is innate and is linked with our hereditary elements, however it is presumed that natural personality cannot be changed. To some extent, do not agree with the above stated statement. This essay considers human personality is variable and hence not constant.
Firstly, to begin with, God has created this universe differently and each inhabitant is different from other.
This is recognized that we born with certain natural qualities which are difficult to alter. In addition, it is an obvious creature of this universe has to go through seven stages of life from a childhood to the adulthood and so on. For instance, we have witnessed various development levels of our child initial stages they intimate from their senior peers as they grow we discover their innate personality traits.
Nevertheless, behavior endures a variable thing, learning centers are portraying the substantial role in shaping youth. However, mentors are investing their efforts in accessing multiple individuals and studying their natural and intimated personnel traits. For example, many parents stated at school enrollment process, child is born with a trait shyness and consider it unchangeable, however, instructor keep an eye on each kid behavior in the classroom and formulate training plan accordingly and repercussion of such plans are so smart, same kid is now coached and trained to overcome their natural shyness and hence, child is entirely a new person more confident and bold.
To conclude, personality traits are subject to change albeit it depends on our surroundings and requirements. Although it is authentic that some natural habits remain the same.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 111, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s on our surroundings and requirements. Although it is authentic that some natural habit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45075757576 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88466057686 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621212121212 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.7518921997 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.916666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161234542048 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582127652249 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569195661914 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878185060666 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640288742454 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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