Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?
Urbanisation, which started from the industrial revolution, has become prevalent all around the world paving the way to numerous issues. Abundance of job opportunities and availability of facilities in urban areas has attracted rural people creating overpopulation. In order to curtail this migration, rural development and enhancements in transportation must be put in to action immediately.
Ample job opportunities available in urban areas has caused people to come and take accommodation in urban areas. More and more buildings, factories, companies are being established in town areas where there are more civilians. In fact, government support and focus are also on town areas exacerbating the problem. For an example, in Sri Lanka, most of the factories and companies are found in the Western Province especially in Colombo district and more and more people are moving to this province in search of employment. Furthermore, most of the facilities related to health, education, transportation also located mainly in urban areas. Humans who naturally have the desire to spend a better life are attracted by these instigating overpopulation in town areas.
Taking immediate and permanent actions to curb this urbanisation is a necessity. First and foremost, developments in rural areas must be carried out. In other words, concerted efforts by governments and businessmen should be put into action to upgrade the facilities in rural areas. Industrial zones, factories, schools, companies should be moved more and more into rural areas so that people will avoid migrating to urban places. Moreover, upgraded transportation can be considered as another solution which will provide a solution to this problem. Once the transportation is developed, it will enable people to travel more efficiently and effectively to their work places, schools etc directly from their homes situated in rural areas.
To recapitulate, overpopulation in urban areas has created significant issues around the globe which occurred due to job opportunities and availability of facilities. By improving the infrastructure in rural areas and transportation facilities would tackle this problem making the life of future generations easy.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65568862275 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27333153589 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52994011976 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6859364419 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.117647059 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6470588235 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179190175193 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617911748192 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436041280829 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120532307444 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173783738929 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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