Overpopulation in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?
Urbanization has been a trend from long past. it is an increase in number of people living in towns and cities; creating there a problem of over population. Nowadays, around half of the world's public is residing in urban areas. this essay will examine the reasons why this is happening and provide solutions for the same.
A majority of individuals prefer to commute to urban centers because of various reasons. Firstly, the scope of better employment is rare in rural areas while there are greater job opportunities with satisfying salary packages in metropolitan cities which can help the workers to earn their livelihoods. For instance, all major industries are generally set-up within the cities, offering placements to people. Secondly, the rise in birth rate and decline rate is responsible for this problem. In urban areas, there are numerous medical facilities that can save lives of all age groups; decreasing the death rate of a particular region. Also, the lack of facilities like water and electricity supply, inferior infrastructure, sanitation, et cetera, is responsible for this migration. Thus, better career opportunities, inadequate facilities and unbalanced birth-death rates are responsible for proliferating among cities and towns.
Tackling this issue involves settlement of factories in rural areas as well in order to give employment to rural people and reduce their movement to urban areas. In addition, government should provide proper supply of water, electricity, sanitation, and other essential facilities that are required by people.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the reasons behind this problem and solutions that can be taken out in order to reduce it. In my opinion, until efforts are made, this problem will only escalate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43636363636 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92213892 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610909090909 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2986209389 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270940561693 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847720428888 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627770676931 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165774174657 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782260353657 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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