Overpopulation in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?
overpopulation is considered one of the most complicated dilemma that a plethora of nations have been suffering for several years. this essay aims to discuss the reasons behind such phenomenon in further detail and it will also offer some effective solutions to mitigate such a serious matter.
To begin with, there is no doubt that the most popular area at any city is the downtown due to various causes. Firstly, city center attracts many individuals to live there. As, it has better services than any other part of the city. For instance, Dubai city is a great place to live. Nevertheless, not all city is dwelled by people, only few places such as Jumerah, Kalifa Road and some others well known area. Since theses territories are surrounded by plenty of entertainment centers, shopping malls, restaurants and many other facilities which lure people to stay there. Secondly, most of the big companies and factories are existed in the downtown to ensure very easy access to their customers and employees. Take jeddah as an example. jeddah is the second biggest city in saudi arabia. The majority of factories and big well known organization are found at the city center. Therefore, workers or even clients prefer to live closely to their daily destination.
However, there are some solution might be effective to overcome such a phenomenon. First of all, government should relocate all big firms and factories into anther part of the city. As a result most of worker who love to be closed to their job might also move and alleviate the pressure in the main city. For example, Riyadh the capital city of saudi arabia, has allocated certain territories for factories and larg organization out of the main city. this great move is to decrease the pressure on the downtown.
To sum up, overpopulation in certain popular areas is a real matter due to different reasons. Nonetheless, there are some effective solution might work very good to reduce this situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, first of all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0547112462 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69431243206 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2288830598 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.15 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.45 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0765088716604 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0230501974352 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275883592408 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518461030477 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141166180823 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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