Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
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over-crowding in cities has contributes to innumerable issues. This essay will first suggest the major problems associated with this phenomenon and then suggest the viable steps to be taken by government and people in order to solve these problems.
The main problems associated with increase in population are rise in unemployment rate and a burden on the natural resources of country. With the growth in the population of nation there are fewer job offers available for them. As a result excess number of people are unemployed with no source of income thus, putting burden on the economy of country. Moreover, over-crowding leads to the depletion of natural resources of country. More and more people need water for various consumption needs such as for washing clothes, drinking water as well as they need land for constructing houses. Thus they are not only becoming scarce but also putting burden on the environment. To elucidate, according to the recent study, India is considered to be the most populated nation with low employment rate and less available natural resources.
In my opinion, the necessary steps to be taken by government and people in order to solve these issues are family planning and tax benefits or concessions. People should be made aware through various campaigns regarding family planning and the serious problems suffered due to over-population. They should be motivated to have at least one or two children. Furthermore, government should make policies related to tax exemption for families having one or maximum two children. The aforementioned ways will help to solve the problem of overpopulation.
To conclude, the main problems linked with the increased population are unemployment rate and pressure on natural resources, and the steps to be taken against these problems by government nad public can be solved through family planning and tax benefit policies. It is predicted that if these steps will be followed by country the problem of increase in population will be solved in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, thus, well, as for, at least, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27076923077 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92640609113 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507692307692 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0256905269 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0625 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108181922599 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363270451133 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473252561397 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0774333714794 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547234973501 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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