In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby.
To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are considering shopping as their leisure activity. It is true that grocery purchase is a daily household job but I believe that this joint shopping activity will develop the relationship between family members and also among friends and also increase product awareness.
Shopping has become a hobby for many because shopping does not mean buying grocery, clothing and other accessories by one family member, it has become a weekly joint task for family members. More than that it has become a complete weekend outing for families to spend time together. Furthermore, nowadays, it is quite common among teenagers to get together in shopping malls. They spend lots of time shopping, window shopping and having quality time with their friends. In addition to the relaxation and quality time, the immense knowledge about each product the hobby shopper attain cannot be neglected. The shoppers study, discuss and understand the product before purchasing it.
On the other hand, making shopping as a leisure time activity has its disadvantages too. Spending on more than what is required is one of the main adverse effects of this hobby. While spending their time in the shopping malls, it is human nature to get attracted to the products displayed. This will create unnecessary expenses which could have avoided if the purchase was made at the local shops. Even if there is no active shopping, there will be some spending if spending time in malls becomes a leisure activity. For instance, a family spending time shopping may be compelled to buy food and drinks as children accompanying may be hungry. These types of extra expenses may affect the family budget slightly but the quality time spent together will make the family bond stronger.
To conclude, although there are few noticeable disadvantages in making shopping as a hobby, the family bond and the relaxation hobby shoppers is not hidden. Moreover, it helps shoppers understand the product better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21604938272 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61500271827 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543209876543 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1182508148 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4117647059 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101848688778 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362026502838 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343100880509 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664291534493 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104892981193 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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