Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children.
Do you agree or disagree?
many argue that computer usage amoung young children have increased this has more negative than positive effect. In my opinion, I agree that prolonged usage of computer can effect children mental and phycial health, however, I also believe that in this digital world survival will be dificult without computers.
First of all, using computer all day long without other activity will lead to serious health problems like obesity and shortsight. A child should be phycicaly activitive too in order to lead a healty life. Regardless of this parents still allow their children to spend time infront of conputers. Another consequence which attribute to extended usage of computer is lonelyness. At this age kids should be allowed to go out and mingle with others of their age rather than sitting alone infront of computers. this is needed for their overall development.
On the other hand, computer knowledge is a must to survive in todays world. To master this, person has to spend more time working on it. Most of the assigments and other interactive is educational programs are easly accessible through computers. In addition to that, learning made easy and intresting using graphics, indepth knowledge of one topic can be acheived siting infround of computer and browsing through. that is why we hear about children who acheivers at very age designing roborts or computer games.
In conclusion, Although I aggree that, there are many disadvantages in using computers especilly long hours, but computers are much more advantagous to this new genration where knowledge is in abundance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
many argue that computer usage amoung young ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...er to lead a healty life. Regardless of this parents still allow their children to s...
^^^^
Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...han sitting alone infront of computers. this is needed for their overall development...
^^^^
Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s needed for their overall development. On the other hand, computer knowledge is...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...the other hand, computer knowledge is a must to survive in todays world. To master this...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
...ound of computer and browsing through. that is why we hear about children who achei...
^^^^
Line 5, column 514, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ge designing roborts or computer games. In conclusion, Although I aggree that, t...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, as to, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25882352941 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69217899824 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63137254902 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1181753571 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253806300216 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789110431178 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972778273916 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160278414044 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100755077705 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.