People are becoming too dependent on the Internet and phone. Is it a positive or negative development?
In this technological world, it has been seen that people become more dependent on mobile phones and internet as compare to past. It is due to the easy availability of network and wide variety of services on mobile phone. I think it has brought both positive and negative aspects on individuals and society as a whole.
On the one hand, now people are busy in their hectic schedule so they hardly get time for their daily commitments like paying bills and needs such as shopping ,food from restaurant etc. by actually visiting those places. Therefore, this advancement provide a features like google pay, amazon and so on to accomplish their tasks with just click. This development not only make their life hassle free but also give them wide range of varieties while making choice at their own pace. Furthermore, internet and mobile phone provide an opportunity to develop and enhance their skills by pursuing online courses from their home almost in every field. Overall, depending on internet has enormous benefits to individuals if it is used properly.
On the other hand, many natives especially teenagers and youngsters usually prefer to spend longer hours on this gadget to relax themselves through chatting with friends, playing games and movies rather than socializing with their dear ones. This type of sedentary lifestyle has adverse impact on their health in terms of obesity, eye vision etc. Besides this, when an individual become addicted to it then he is too influenced by it that he hesitate to interact with others. As a result, they not only lack social and communication skills but also develop anti social behavior in them.
In conclusion, although there are immense benefits of internet. It has made our life so easy that people can do multi task conveniently. However, impact of its extreme usage can not be denied. It is suggested that it should be monitored properly.
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It is the fact that…
It is the fact that technology has evolved rapidly in recent decades and that as a result, made some lifestyle changes in people. Mobiles devices and internet are considered to be the greatest discovery in the last few decades, which has helped humans completing their day-to-day tasks quickly. However, in my opinion, now humans are dependent on the devices that lead to many drawbacks, which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, technological development in the mobile industry is the primary reason why people from the current generation are not making healthy lifestyle choices. In other words, nowadays we have numerous options such as trying out different online restaurants, where food from almost all the restaurants are available with some appealing offers. With a single click, the food is delivered by food aggregator company's executive in a short span of 30 minutes or so. The end-user or customer is unaware of the hygiene, quality and the timing of the prepared food and as a result, one's health is compromised. A recent study by livemint, an Indian news publisher suggests that people who started using these food aggregator services such as Zomato and Swiggy, are more likely to suffer from any illness and are prone to viruses.
Moreover, there is now less interaction among people and family members. In the past, without the innovation in the mobile industry people used to meet quite often even for small functions or for no reason. Now due to the online availability, many people chat over the internet and make video calls; therefore, meeting people in-person does not appeal them much. And, as a result, they tend to cancel the social gatherings, events and festivals, which again increase the social isolation. To cite an example, a study from The Guardian suggests that there is a steep decline in the number of times in a year an individual meet his friends and family.
In conclusion, although smartphones have revolutionized the way we work and eased out our day-to-day task, I believe there are far more concerning issues about this addictive trend such as social isolation and unhealthy lifestyle choices and these needs to be addressed soon before it is too late.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03164556962 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60955284735 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639240506329 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7843667196 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5294117647 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230812336638 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06294614584 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735078954844 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135607814041 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102193595109 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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