People cart eat a wide variety of food that can be grown in other areas. As a result, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
In the past, dwellers' diet was undiversified and could eat foods, which produced in their local areas. On the contrary, because of advanced technologies, these images have been changing when people can experience various foods in other countries. However, this causes both the pros and cons that I will examine in this essay.
In the one hand, thanks to modern transportation, people can try several delicious cuisines that they do not need to go overseas. For example, city-dwellers in china can buy Vietnamese bread in their own country or those who live in the North Pole can eat fruits as they cannot grow in a cold place. Moreover, this improvement can provide a link of trading foods among several countries, creating a huge profit for their economic. Furthermore, citizens, who want to have a permanent job, are capable of having a chance to find it. For instance, an export company will hire more employees to meet import countries' requirements for manufacturing products.
In the other hand, imported foods have overweighed disadvantage points. when exporting the goods such as fruits, vegetables, or slices of beef, exporters have to spray the fertilizers or preservative substance to make the foods fresher, which cause directly harmful to people's health. To illustrate, a thousand imported bottles of milk from china are found that it contains melamine causing a hundred of thousands of infant deaths in the United States. Another disadvantage of foods importing is the high price of overseas' products causing inflation in a country. For instance, Iraq's authorities have to reduce the price of local foods to stimulate consumers to buy it.
In conclusion, imported foods have its pros and cons that I mentioned above. I think this trend should tackle in order to balance the consumption of the local areas foods and other regions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17275747508 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85424406761 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614617940199 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.499274067 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292526130516 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967126171527 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683972807103 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190048139057 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488237225203 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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