People often believe that great musicians are born and not made. Do you agree that we are born with much of our ability or are there other factors as family, environment that determine success.
Celebrities or famous people not only fascinate crowd, but also acts as a role model for many. Some people contend that such profound people, especially in the field of art, music and sports have an in-built talent which makes them successful. However, I endorse an opposite opinion, and believe that success if an outcome of hard work, commitment and sweat, but not just a god gift. The following paragraphs of this essay will delineate pertinent arguments to support this understanding.
To initiate, it is a well know fact that hard work is the key to success. it applies irrespective of the fact that a person have or have not any god gifted capabilities. if the principles of the game are mastered, then success if not far. Moreover, success can be accelerated by understanding and implementing the tricks of the trade. this has been best illustrated in the documentary of famous cricket legend, Sachin Tendulkar, who hailed from a poor family, yet with dedication, constant endeavors and smart approach, emerged as the god of cricket.
The other factors that dominate success are endorsing positive outlook and having a right coach. A positive outlook to life contributes to winning half of the battle, as individuals get blessed by spiritual powers. Further, having an experienced coach helps teach the best practices, techniques and strategies of any game. An enriched experienced of a talented coach can bless years of expertise in few months to his trainees. For example, famous musician, zakir Hussain, was trained under world famous musician, Tabir Khan, who taught him all the knowledge music which assisted zakir to be the best drummer in his childhood itself.
To put in a nutshell, there is no short cut to success. One might be born with an extra-ordinary talent or exemplary skills, but it is worthless without hard work, dedication and proper guidance. god gifted talents can be considered as an icing on the cake rather being taken as the sole factor of success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04848484848 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83056906154 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612121212121 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9174505947 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11380171664 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346239554166 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293111305763 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672511458875 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179854846495 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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