People often believe that great musicians are born and not made. Do you agree that we are born with much of our ability or are there other factors as family, environment that determine success.
An artist is a person who has professional skills to entertain the masses. Some people believe that musicians are born with much of the ability. According to me, an artist is not born with his abilities, it depends upon their family as well as environment. I will shedsome light on my views in upcoming paragraphs.
There are myriad of factors to make an artist from a simple person. First of all, a child's mind is like a wet soil. It depends on the family that how they want to mold it. Family plays a vital role in their children's career. Sometime, a parent had a dream to become a creator but due to some reasons or his circumstances, he did not get chance to fulfill his dreams. So, as a parents, they want that their children fulfill their dreams. Moreover environment of the family matters a lot. In a childhood what a child see, he tries to adopt those things. If any family member is an artist, surely the child will be influenced by this. For example - most of the film actors or magicians chosen this profession because their family members are in this occupation.
Apart from this, influence of media on the children
taking its place day by day.They are thinking that if we will opt this profession then we can earn fame, success and more money.
To conclude, parents know well that what is their children's ability as well as it depends on the circumstances. Sometimes, children do not get a chance to enhance their ability due to circumstances.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ians are born with much of the ability. According to me, an artist is not born with his abiliti...
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Suggestion: a parent; parents
...et chance to fulfill his dreams. So, as a parents, they want that their children fulfill ...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...at their children fulfill their dreams. Moreover environment of the family matters a lot...
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...this, influence of media on the children taking its place day by day.They are thi...
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Suggestion: They
... children taking its place day by day.They are thinking that if we will opt this p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, for example, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62068965517 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.643481802 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3996463727 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9411764706 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3529411765 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113543314134 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407739141165 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841999655071 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654740710126 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064112384656 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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