People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effects does it have on individually and on society?
This is a fact that taking enough sleep is good for physical and mental health. It is often said that in these days people sleep less than past. I am going to cover its affects on both individuals and society as a whole.
Admittedly, nowadays people do not have time take sufficient rest due to many potential reasons. Firstly, people have hectic schedule of life in this competitive era as both genders are working for contributing in household wealth. Therefore, they only take rest for three to four hours that is not adequate for a heathy lifestyle. Moreover, it causes stress and makes their mind undisturbed and these happen when people spend most of time on thinking and working instead of sleeping. Secondly, if people sleep less after working hard whole day then they become anxious and irritate that causes mental diseases as they keep thinking all the time about money or standard of living. As a result, they can not maintain a strong relationship with others as individuals become self minded and do not care about others. Finally, taking insufficient rest leads to lack of focus as they do not feel mentally fresh and feel depression which results in decreasing productivity and poor performance at job. So, by compromising with their health they do not only deceasing performance but also becoming burden for their family.
Additionally, an unhealthy person is not able to contribute in the well- being of society as community expects good returns from people who are holding lucrative professions. That is why. If the person is unable to provide local services, society can not take those benefits. For example, teachers and doctors can not serve well if they are not healthy. Apart from this, when masses are under depression they do not communicate with others. Hence, lack of interactions would weaken the relationship among individuals.
To conclude, Although i believe that sleeping less impacts individuals, it also has some adverse impacts on community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07339449541 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70324283288 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590214067278 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3134828544 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238464226489 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708038175941 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771143106717 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156036803991 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741573312718 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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