Some people think that government is wasting money on arts and this money could be spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?
government is responsible to facilitate public by allocating funds equally to all fields. it is thought by some that spending money on arts is a wastage and higher authorities should rather prefer other areas to be funded. While i believe that there are other important sectors that need to be developed such as medical, education and housing, arts are an integral part of the history of a country and its importance csn not be ignored.
On the one hand, funds need to be allocated to other areas for the overall development of the country. first of all, with the technoloy increasingly support people by providing good employment opportunities as all enterprises whether big or small prefer to computerised system instead of paperwork, so they need more techno- savy employees qualified in prestigious universites. therefore, education should be prioritised by government to spend money because literate population contributes in boosting economic position of country. Secondly, good health care services is another significant area to consider by administration as the people who live under poverty line are not able to afford huge expenses of medication, particularly in an event of emergency. Hence, higher authorities aid underpriviledged population by providing money, so that they can get treatment timely.
Finally, Infrastructure of the country must be funded that includes roads, parks and other amenties for community as poor constructed roads may csuse accidents and amusement parks should be established as a relaxation activity by the government. As a consequent, it will not only brings progress of the country, but also prosperity and happiness among people.
On the other hand, In my opinion, arts and sculpturs has a significant role to play for the economy of the country. first of all, arts are the pride of any country as it denotes the historical background of the country which is extremely important for new generations to learn about. However, if the goverment will not spend money on renovations of historical buildings, new generations would fail to visit and know about the history of the nation. Additinally, arts attracts tourists from other country as strong historical background appeal people to visit the country for experiencing worth- seeing places of the country. For example, India is diverse country and having a rich historical background, where many people sacrificed to protect the country from outside forces as well as its traditional forts which attract people from all over the world. Moreover, Tourism leads economic development of the country as toursists from other countries come and spend money to visit places. Last but not least, without arts country looks dull, so different kinds of arts whether buildings or drawings adds to the beauty of the country. therefore, government must allocae a part of money to fund arts.
To conclude, Although i believe that government should focus on other areas such as health care and education, arts are also equally important and can not be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as for, as to, for example, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2566.0 1615.20841683 159% => OK
No of words: 485.0 315.596192385 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29072164948 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96500007124 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513402061856 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 799.2 506.74238477 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4574029838 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.052631579 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5263157895 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152106089712 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540897776706 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365658486585 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889240382446 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350471495062 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.