People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out.
What are the causes?
What solutions can you suggest?
In this modern time, the security of people has become a serious concern as many people feel unsafe at home and in public places. The main reason for this insecurity is the surge in criminal activities by unemployed youngsters and one key solution to this problem is the generation of employment opportunities by the government.
To begin with, an increase in the involvement of many young people in criminal offences is responsible for making people insecure at every place. The reason for this is most of the youngsters remain unemployed even after qualifying for higher degrees which makes harder for them to earn bread and butter for their families. As a consequence, they tread on a wrong path to earn money and usually threaten the general public by snatching their money, mobile phones and gold ornaments. For instance, according to a survey by the 'Time' in India, there has been a 40% increase in criminal activities by young people with no job in hand for the last 5 years. Thus, this creates a fear among the people due to which they feel unsafe.
To combat this overindulgence of young generation in delinquencies, the government should generate various job opportunities. With the increase in the number of jobs in diverse sectors such as mechanical, electrical, computer, chemical and engineer, the youngsters will get specified work in accordance with their qualification, as a result, they will not perform any unethical actions to earn money. To exemplify, in Chandigarh a state in Punjab, by introducing ample jobs by authorities in areas of information technology for the graduates a 60% decline in the crime rate has been observed since last 2 years in that area. Therefore, if the government provides employment to the degree holders, then the crime rate will definitely decrease and this world will become a safe place to live in.
In conclusion, people feel less safe today as a result of increased offences by unemployed youth. To remedy this problem, the government should create more employment for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... to earn money and usually threaten the general public by snatching their money, mobile phones...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ould create more employment for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10089020772 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9050005604 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543026706231 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.8828769063 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.230769231 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9230769231 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107618105345 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487060260026 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566643301418 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808350262947 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373829656197 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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