You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes.
Write a letter to the community college. In your letter:
say which advertisement you are answering
describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about
explain why you would be a suitable teacher
Dear Sir or Madam,
Through the columns of a local newspaper, I came across the advertisement of the requirement of teacher for night classes at your renowned institution. I am a university student pursuing masters of computer and I want to apply for the job offered by your college.
I am interested in teaching computer languages as I am quite proficient in Java, C, C++ and Python. Moreover, I have made two live projects during my six months training which have inculcated in me the knowledge of the latest technologies. Additionally, high grades have been scored by me in these languages in my academic results. Considering the difficulty of computer languages, it would be beneficial for the students to study these subjects in extra classes.
Further, in order to utilize my time and to fund my studies, I am highly interested to join this job. I have also done JAVA certification from Sun Microsoft last year which adds more points to my eligibility. Therefore, my qualification and appropriate experience make me more suitable for this job. I also assure the quality of teaching and better results.
I will look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhjot Kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, Through the columns of a local newspaper...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08080808081 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06288877103 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641414141414 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2159264699 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177401611767 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579885599799 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386797205736 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847986570193 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059554795944 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.