Transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today.
What are the causes of this problem, and how could the situation be improved?
It is an undeniable fact that nowadays the problem of transportation has become a serious issue of concern in major cities. The less number of public transport facilities and citizens not abiding the traffic rules have exaggerated the traveling hours and delays. However, this problem can be alleviated by introducing metros and public buses and, charging high penalties on violating regulations.
To begin with, there are a plethora of factors responsible for the surge in road congestions. The first and foremost is the less government commuting facilities available for the general public. Owing to this, people make use of their private individual vehicles which lead to an increased number of on-road commuters. As a result, roads get blocked with the high volume of vehicles leading to heavy traffic jams, which, in turn, hinders the transportation system. For instance, according to the report by Delhi Traffic Police, 60% of the congestion on the Delhi highways is caused by private cars. Secondly, another crucial factor is that people do not abide by the rules and regulations defined for driving. This is because drivers do not follow the road instructions such as checking the traffic lights and moving in the right lanes.
Nevertheless, these problems can be resolved by taking some measures. Primarily, the introduction of fast and spacious public transport facilities can reduce the number of jams on the roads. Moreover, the technical commuting services such as metro, trans-buses and local trains are more convenient and fastest ways of transportation which can be opted to clear congested paths and to avoid detaining travels. Next, high penalties should be charged to the person who does not follow the traffic rules. For example, according to new rules in India, a chalan of Rs.1000 is charged for breaking red light. Consequently, this will lower the levels of traffic and delay in journies.
In conclusion, although transportation congestion is a crucial problem, this can be solved by increasing the modes of public transport and issuing high fines to the ones not following the rules.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30177514793 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8720238004 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565088757396 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1490963998 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.411764706 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132676792819 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443992353761 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388743835345 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998655830906 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368878638747 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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