People trend to travel longer distance nowadays than in the past. What are reason for this? Is this a positive or negative trend?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of academics believing that nowadays, there is a trend among society to travel long distance as compared to the earlier times. With the advancement of technology, there are a number of transport sources available for travelling. Although, travelling remotely has a greater impact on society and it has both pros and cons.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stances. The most preponderant one is that by commuting from one place to another, people can be connected with their near and dear ones. In the past time, there were not enough facilities to go and met with relatives and friends. These days, numerous vehicles are available for the journey. Another reason is some people go abroad for further studies or for settling down. For instance, by travelling to foreign countries, they are able to attain more knowledge about their languages and cultures. Therefore, individuals can broaden their horizons.
There are, however, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of travelling a longer distance. The primary one stems from the fact that by observing the aforementioned trend, people have not realized its gravity, but also gauged the magnitude of its repercussions when it comes to today's ever-changing lifestyle. Besides, its impact on the environment by causing pollution with an increasing number of vehicles is far-reaching indeed. For example, vehicle causes air pollution with which community is greatly impacted by the harmful gases. Thus, most of the people may fall sick. Hence, it is apparent why many are against travelling a long distance.
To conclude, without any doubt, this is a mixed bag. If travel longer distance has many positives then the negative points of this notion may not be underestimated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84578440661 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3243925319 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4444444444 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273518485152 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666915265396 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678562203828 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162492261252 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678198900748 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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