People who travel to another country to live, work or study for a period of time often suffer badly from homesickness.Why is this?What are the best ways to reduce this problem?
In the contemporary society, it is true that innumerable people who travel either to migrate or study to another country often suffer from homesickness. This is because life is not serene in other countries and has its own drawbacks. In this essay, I will analyse some relevant problems and give possible solutions as well.
Many people assert that other countries have more benefits and better lifestyle. However, this is not true. Firstly, many people are homesick in other countries because of loneliness. Moreover, they do not have the privilege to live a king size life compared to their own house. For example, a person living in sharing accommodation does not have the liberty to do whatever he wishes to do. He needs to adhere the daily routine and make sure he doesn't disturb or create brawl with others. Secondly, an individual is responsible to do all the work by his own as labor wages are very expensive in these countries. In addition, in some countries, language barrier is a major drawback. There is a lack of communication and one cannot express his feelings in spite of being upset or in need of anything. As a result, he is badly affected by homesickness. Lastly, food plays a paramount role for a person in homesickness because you may not get the taste or food which you desire and expensive.
Accordingly, the solution to the aforementioned issue can also be varied. To start with, people who travel to other countries should connect with individuals via internet who are already present in the country. Moreover, he should socialize more and join community clubs to avoid loneliness. Secondly, an individual should look for his own accommodation to avoid conflicts and can live life happily without missing home. In addition, individuals should be well prepared in advance to do their own work and with positive attitude. This will not only keep them busy but also make them self dependent and avoids homesickness. In addition, people should be well aware about the local language in order to communicate with ease. This will help them to engage with different people and also will grow the social circle. Lastly, a person moving to another country should learn to cook because it will help him to cook whatever he likes to eat and will also help to reduce the cost of his daily expense.
To summarize, life outside home country is not easy as it appears. However, people should make necessary arrangements like socializing, working and cooking before relocating to a new place to avoid homesickness.
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, as a result, in spite of, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2113.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96009389671 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76553419317 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521126760563 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8510620217 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.52 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.04 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.48 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238428925415 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646669846075 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675731640061 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167127457941 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098957648663 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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