An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in a developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?
In the contemporary society, it is true that innumerable professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their home country and migrating to developed countries. This is because of the better lifestyle and a serene life. In this essay, I will analyse some relevant and give possible solutions as well.
Developed countries offer a better living and a peaceful life. Firstly, a major worry for an individual is to have sufficient remuneration to run his house and have a better lifestyle to maintain his status in the society. However, this lacks in developing or poorer countries. Secondly, individuals infuse a huge amount of money or donations into their education to gain their degree like doctors, professors or engineers with the hope of career success and lead a blissful life in future. Admittedly, they are not paid enough in spite of having a professional degree. Lastly, professionals are not given added benefits like healthcare and retirement compared with developed countries. Due to this, many professionals migrate to a developed country which is a major drawback for the developing countries.
Accordingly, the solution to the aforementioned issue should also be varied. Firstly, professionals like doctors and teachers are very paramount for developing countries. Moreover, their salary pay should be handsome amount to enjoy a better life and status in the society. In addition, government should invest and encourage especially younger generation to gain a professional degree. This will not only benefit individuals but also help in the growth and development of the country. Moreover, government should add on special benefits for professionals by providing healthcare and retirement benefits. Lastly, government should also infuse in infrastructure facilities which will benefit individuals and professionals to have a Eco friendly and a better lifestyle.
To summarize, several problems can be caused by many professionals migrating to a developed country to enjoy the benefits and have a great life. I believe, government should take measures including proving various benefits to professionals and raising public awareness to solve these disturbing issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, such as, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58682634731 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18709727081 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51497005988 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3236442042 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2105263158 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5789473684 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57894736842 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214568737051 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774241586923 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077068001818 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149690884778 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704505266188 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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