The percentage of overweight children on western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.
Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.
Underage Obesity is increasingly common in the western world. Over the last dacade, Western Societies have seen close to a one-fifth rise im number of children who are overweight. This essay will discuss some reasons why this has occurred and examine consequences of this concernes trend.
The main cause of this issue is poor diet. Over the last ten years there has been increased in number of faat foods restaurants. For instance, Almost every streets of junctions have 2 or more fast foods joints such as Mr biggs, Pizza hut and Taste Fried Chicken to mention few. The food sold in this place has been proveen to be unhealthy. Their major advertising strategies focuses on the children be cause they beleive underage constitue bulk of their customers. Morealso, It is not only eating out that make the child obsessed, given junks or ready made food to child at home is another major factor. Most parent are working hard are they do not have enough time to cook in their respective home.
The effects of this have been consider to be very serious. First and foremost, Not eating balance diet can result to disease such as infections because of low immune system to combact it. Finally, Overweight child always suffer psychological and emotional disorder among their peers because there have a stigma of being called biggy and this could lower their self- esteem.
To conclude, It seen that the impact of obseity amongst western children is negative. Societu must ensire that steps are taken to prevent this problem from been deteroriating.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96538461538 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45678326754 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1636243329 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242973920412 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749583599297 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057073971557 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142064640787 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887205214359 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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