Politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued, that public servants personal lives should not be allowed to write in news or release in social media. I totally agree with this statement because the Political Leaders are also normal people who need privacy and media should focus more on their social activities rather than focusing on their personal deeds.
Every individual has their own lifestyle and they wants to lead it in their comfort zone. Likewise, politicians also have the right to enjoy their life, instead media wants to expose the public figures sensitive matters in social media which is impacting their life. When they are given enough space to live a normal life it will be possible for them to fulfill their social duties. As media wants to spike their viewer rating they focus on popular leaders’ activities which causes inconvenience to them. For instance, Ukraine’s’ Chief Minister was more affected by media by focusing on news they published. Instead, he would have concentrated on his election campaign.
Mostly, the media focuses on the dark side of famous people and try to portray them in an incorrect way. Instead these news channels can bring them into limelight by broadcasting their social activities like the charity they do or many other inspiring information which would be more effective to society. For example, most of the youth will take their favorite leader as their role model and get inspired by their social activities which benefits the society.
In conclusion, we can say that privacy in Politicians lives should be allowed because they also have the right to live with freedom and enjoy their personal life without any disturbances. It is recommended that media should focus on statesmen social life instead of their private life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...vidual has their own lifestyle and they wants to lead it in their comfort zone. Likew...
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Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an incorrect way" with adverb for "incorrect"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...f famous people and try to portray them in an incorrect way. Instead these news channels can bring ...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
...ry to portray them in an incorrect way. Instead these news channels can bring them into...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14583333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63870613402 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545138888889 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1752829227 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112624351819 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493821073391 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450623652538 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871273688161 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457733314802 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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